Final Magazine Draft.

Above is the draft of my magazine advertising my teaser trailer. After looking at previous editions of Empire magazine, I noticed that colour was quite important in making it look more genuine which is why I tried adding in blue and red to my own. I think the things that worked well in my draft was the top banner advertising 25 exclusive covers and also the plus the Oscar specials and 25 must see films of 2014. However, things I don't think worked very well was the text advertising my film, I felt that it didn't look professional. This also goes for the text below advertising the exclusive with the celebrities. Now when I go back into edit my magazine, I will look at changing these things and I will also correct the repetitive things such as the word 'exclusive' and also correct any grammatical errors such as the 'must see must see films' which is shown above.